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Post by Alice on Dec 21, 2009 13:56:44 GMT -5
(ooc: Lol xDD)
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Post by me on Dec 21, 2009 14:19:15 GMT -5
(OOC: xD)
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Terra Remora
Denali
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Because maybe, you're gonna be the one who saves me? Cause after all, you're my wonderwall...[Mo0:0]
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Post by Terra Remora on Dec 22, 2009 20:26:33 GMT -5
(ooc: Okay, like this.. "How's Jasper?" Lucy asked. You do it like that, talking as your character would in a book)
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Lucy Moon
Nomad
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~You will die, only if you kill my true beloved~"Tremble for my beloved!":)[Mo0:0]
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Post by Lucy Moon on Dec 22, 2009 20:32:42 GMT -5
I walked into room and asked"How was Jasper,when he changed me...did he want to it?" OOC:Perfect yet?
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Post by me on Dec 22, 2009 20:34:23 GMT -5
(OOC: No, and the OOC part was wrong too.)
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Terra Remora
Denali
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Because maybe, you're gonna be the one who saves me? Cause after all, you're my wonderwall...[Mo0:0]
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Post by Terra Remora on Dec 22, 2009 20:36:43 GMT -5
(ooc: First off, say Lucy, not I. It's not you saying it. And also, since when did Jazz change Lucy?)
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Post by jasper on Dec 22, 2009 20:39:04 GMT -5
Jasper walked into Alice's room. "Hey," he said, smiling at her. "Who are you?" he asked Lucy.
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Lucy Moon
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~You will die, only if you kill my true beloved~"Tremble for my beloved!":)[Mo0:0]
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Post by Lucy Moon on Dec 22, 2009 20:40:06 GMT -5
"You changed me remember?"
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Post by jasper on Dec 22, 2009 20:40:58 GMT -5
(OOC: Nope. Two mistakes: You're not Lucy. It's Lucy walked into Alice's room, not I. And you need a space between that period which is right after Question and the ".)
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Post by jasper on Dec 22, 2009 20:41:25 GMT -5
"What?" Jasper asked. He looked at Alice in confusion.
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Terra Remora
Denali
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Because maybe, you're gonna be the one who saves me? Cause after all, you're my wonderwall...[Mo0:0]
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Post by Terra Remora on Dec 22, 2009 20:42:23 GMT -5
( And after a quote, always say said Lucy or said Terra or said MJ. Whoever is talking.)
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Post by jasper on Dec 22, 2009 20:45:00 GMT -5
(OOC: Like this: "Follow MEEEEEE!" Frosty the Snowman said to Perry the Platypus. Then he got crushed by a car. <-----See?)
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Lucy Moon
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~You will die, only if you kill my true beloved~"Tremble for my beloved!":)[Mo0:0]
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Post by Lucy Moon on Dec 22, 2009 20:46:20 GMT -5
I noticed my red eyes were gonna turn gold soon.
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Post by Alice on Dec 22, 2009 20:46:48 GMT -5
(ooc: So random xDD)
Alice had no idea what was going on. For half the conversation she had been stuck in a vision. "Huh?" Alice asked, confused.
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Lucy Moon
Nomad
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~You will die, only if you kill my true beloved~"Tremble for my beloved!":)[Mo0:0]
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Post by Lucy Moon on Dec 22, 2009 20:47:57 GMT -5
(OOC:yea)
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