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Post by Boot on Mar 17, 2010 22:14:13 GMT -5
You should put correct capitalization, punctuation, spelling (the best you can do, at least), -tense (past-tense, present-tense, future-tense), and italics.
Example for capitalization:
(Wrong): cass Ate a Sandwich named bill And died. (Right): Cass ate a sandwich named Bill and died.
Example for punctuation:
(Wrong): " Hi Lacey Want to eat a sandwich named Bill He is yummy cause I didn't die when I ate him. ". Cass said evilly (Right): "Hi Lacey. Want to eat a sandwich named Bill? He is yummy cause I didn't die when I ate him," Cass said evilly.
Example for spelling:
(Wrong): Laacet died wen shee 8 th iky sanwich named Biill. (Right): Lacey died when she ate the icky sandwich named Bill.
Example for -tense:
(Wrong): Ani eats a hamburger. "NOMNOMNOM," she says. The wind and Ani dance around in circles and shout, "HAMBURGER BUDDIES HAMBURGER BUDDIES!" like idiots. They keeps shouting till they die. The end. (Right): Ani ate a hamburger. "NOMNOMNOM," she said. The wind and Ani danced around in circles and shouted, "HAMBURGER BUDDIES HAMBURGER BUDDIES!" like idiots. They kept shouting till they died. The end.
Example for thoughts:
Heh heh heh...Now Bill and Lacey are dead! MUAHAHAHAHA! Cass yelled in her head. She was making weird laughing faces without sound and the guy next to her thought, Just walk away and don't look back...O.O
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